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Thursday, July 25, 2019

This is the piece of writing i´v been working on.

                                                                             Atlantis

Once upon a time there was a city named Atlantis. There was a mum named Sabra, dad named Paul, son named Jackie, a daughter named Maria and they had a dog named Luff Cuff. One day they went out for a walk up a hill, they were looking at the beautiful view of Atlantis. They started walking down the hill and saw turtles swimming around, dolphins jumping up rebounding off the water, fish swimming so fast. But then Luff Cuff started to bark loudly, he had never done that before. Maria walked over to -Luff Cuff to see what he was barking at, Maria noticed that it was just another dog that lived next door. Maria went over and patted him and said “hi there Sam what are you doing over here you are a bit far from home we'll take you back with us when we go home’. Maria started walking back to go and drop Sam off but on the way back to Sam’s house Maria saw the house crumbling down and saw the people all ‘’SCREAMING HELP US, HELP US PLEASE’’ Maria did not know what to do so she ran off looking for help!!! But she didn't end up finding help so she ran as fast as she could to see her mum and dad to tell them the news. They didn't know what to do but just stood there crying and screaming. They had to move somewhere safer to live rather than Atlantis but they could not find any flights that would be flying anywhere because of what happened. There was a big enormous storm that happened  so the flight people said that there won't be any flights until tomorrow.  Then there mum told them a story about what happened in the past when she was little.


When I was a little girl I lived in Ahipara, it was a beautiful place. I lived with my mum named Susan and my dad named Kyle, they were the best parents in the world my mum would cook a very delicious dinner, lunch and desert. My dad would make the most tastiest BBQ ever, the sausages were perfectly cooked the patties were so joyful and salty, the salads that my dad made was so healthy I could eat them all day. One day Ahipara celebrated this most wonderful festival ever, we got to eat candy floss, lollies, fizzy’s and many more we got to do rock climbing and jump on bouncy castles. That was a bit of my story


The next morning mum, dad and 2 kids woke up to see if the flights were open. Before that they had breakfast, they had nurture grain with milk. Then they went to the airport to ask the manager if the flights are open yet. The manager said yes so the mum and dad applied for a flight for all of them. They flew to Hawaii were they enjoyed the nice warm swims, they loved it so much they lived happily ever after.

THE END

Mihi-Rangi.


ATLANTIS THE MYSTERY LOST WORLD