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Thursday, June 27, 2019

This is could a jackiwa poem

Matariki- Jackiwa poem

Matariki
Seven sisters,
Shining brightly think,
Bringing the star cluster
Celebrating the new year
The stars move
New day

family 


3 comments:

  1. I like how you add a title. Next time you could put the word family not to far away from the word new day.

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  2. Great work Mihi, its very good.

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  3. great work next time put family closer.

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